Dusty Room
Tearing walls ripping down
The smell of mold goes round and round
The taste of black Liquorice makes everything vicious
Windy sounds come rushing through in different areas of the room
From wall to wall the smell gets stronger
Inside and outside no smell of delight
Trapped all alone and nowhere to go
But no need to stress it's just a big mess
Walking through the door
we notice the ripped walls
moulded roofs
with rats crawling through
and cockroaches
crawling round and round
As I arrived in the room I looked down.
And I see Paint falling off the roof and I start to drown
I could smell a Musty smell on the wall.
Than I start feeling small.
When I looked around I can hear the Mouse's footsteps running on the roof.
But I wish it would be soundproof
As I drew the Curtains then I feel goosebumps coming up my arm
As I walk around the room I have this kind of dry taste in my mouth like I want to spew it out.
The room starts to rumble
The ceiling began to crumble
Smelling mould
I start to get a cold
Everything’s broken
And it can’t be spoken
Disgusting floors
Covered in paint
Broken draws
I wanted to faint
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Tuesday, 13 December 2016
Dusty Room
Here is a poem about a dusty room that needs to be cleaned I hope you enjoy.
The Gatherers
These people came from far to take crops from a village to take back to their Planet. These people had weird ships that collected crops faster than before. The village didn't know what to do.
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Surf Rideing
This Presentation is about questions that are based on surfing. Questions that question what are surfing competitions and how many people attend these competitions.
Coming Up
WALT: identify a problem and a solution in a story.
Here is a google drawing about a story called Coming Up. As you can see on google I have put some sentences into T.O.P.S which is Title, Orientation, Problem and Solution.
Why do our muscles get tired?
WALT: make effective notes and condense ideas to summarize
Here is a presentation about an activity that we have done about why do our muscles get tired. This presentation also includes muscle fatigue and also a little voice over that tells you how can you can beat muscle fatigue.
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Manaiakalani Film Festival Review
Our teacher Miss Berry told us to write about one of the Manaiakalani Film Festival Movies and write a review about it. We had to contain what the movie was about, camera shots that were used and the amount of lighting, could you understand what the movie was about and was the editing any good. I hope you enjoy.
Room 5’s film is about being Cyber Smart at our digital school and to avoid the influence from using a phone during the school hours. This is one way not to be Cyber Smart because there is no teacher to view the things that you're on. This is a funny film to some pupils and is suitable for children aged 10+. Younger children will not understand the meaning of the message towards this film because they won’t have phones at their age. This film has some people thinking why didn’t they provide information for younger kids to understand.
The film has slang words that younger kids won’t really understand the meaning of it. Words like gap it eahh and care which are words that are really hard to understand. The script didn’t tell us what the story was about until you had read the title. This could be confusing for a younger audience.
The lighting was not consistent during this film because some shots were darker than others. In one scene the lighting was a bit darker than the others but it was still good to watch. Angles they use was mostly full body shots and head shots which were awesome in the movie.
The set for the film was just the right place for it and went with the story. One of the scenes was in the playground and had the actors playing on the mobile and hiding from the teachers so that made sense. Their costume was the school uniform to show that they were at school at the time and was appropriate for the making.
The film flowed really well and the length of the film was just right. I am overwhelmed on the progress that this class has given us and can’t wait till they make another film to entertain us. I’m giving this film a rating of 3.5 because the film was good but they could've made it much better if they explained the story more thoroughly and at the end
What Is Matter?
Here is a presentation about What Is Matter? It talks about what is matter, explains what molecules are and the different states of matter. I hope you enjoy.
Monday, 21 November 2016
Triple Island Stars
Here is a video to show you how to make a Triple Island Star (Triple Ninja Star). All last week Class 4 Literacy have been making Origami's and I decided to make a triple Island Star. I hope you enjoy.
Monday, 1 August 2016
The River
WALT: Identify a problem and a solution in a Story
Here is a google drawing about a story that our teacher made to see if we can Identify a Problem and Solution.
Friday, 8 July 2016
Intro to Matariki
Here is a activity about Introducing Matariki. Matariki is a cluster of starts that starts the Maori New Year. Matariki is also 7 sisters named Tupu-a-nuku, Tupu-a-rangi, Waiti, Waita, Waipuna-a-rangi and Ururangi.
Thursday, 7 July 2016
The Broad Street Killer
This Presentation about a killer that has been killing people around London. These people were investigating who was killing people everyday.
The Three Cricket Legends
Here is a Presentation about Three Cricket Legends that were noticed from people Their names are Debbie Hockley, Tim Southee, Bert Sutcliffe. These people are some Legends in Cricket History.
Friday, 20 May 2016
Navigating into the Pacific
Hey is something we have done to show our understanding of what Polynesian people used to navigate them to better lands.
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Thursday, 17 March 2016
Stockade and Pa
This presentation is about how the British and Maori people fort against each other and how a stockade and a Maori pa works I hope you enjoy Looking at all of this information.
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Friday, 11 March 2016
Tomorrow People
Here is a story about John that is from a group of people with Powers called Tomorrow people. I hope you enjoy reading.
Hi my name is John and i’m a tomorrow person. We have powers known as the three T’s Teleportation, Telekinesis and telepathy and we help the world. 10 years ago I found out that I had powers and I had to run away from my hometown and never went back because I thought that I would kill people. But then these people called Tomorrow people helped me to control my powers and welcomed me into this old train station hideout.
One day at school I became really angry at someone because they were mocking me because how I looked and I began to have a fight. When I went home my mum was seated at the dining table she looked really angry and furious. As I sat she became to calm down then yelled at me “ WHY DID YOU HAVE A FIGHT DID YOU WANT TO GET KICK OUT OF SCHOOL!!!!!” I said to her “ He was mocking me so I started to push him and threw a punch.
The next day at school I fell asleep during a math lesson and was dreaming about me having powers and destroying my school and it looked pretty cool destroying everything. I had powers the could pick things up and could read people's minds also could teleport from places. As I woke up I was sitting in the hallway outside my classroom as I look around the place was a mess and there was Furniture everywhere. Then I was about to.... To be continued
Thursday, 10 March 2016
The Battle
Here is a presentation about a book called The Battle. The Battle is about two kids that have a dance battle. I hope you enjoy
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Tuesday, 8 March 2016
Fair Chocolate
Here is a Presentation about companies that do fair trade. This fair trade is about Chocolate Factory's that do fair trade. Fair trade is two companies that trade between each other and give more money to people that get the Cocoa from the trees.
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Friday, 4 March 2016
The Haunted House
Here is a story about three brothers Jeff, Jack and David that were stuck in a Haunted House. I hope you enjoy.
They looked up there was a rope hanging from the ceiling so they grabbed it and pulled on it. While they were pulling the light shining on the steps started to turn off so they pulled harder and harder then they were out of the pit toys and began to ran towards the steps and ran up them.... TO BE CONTINUED
There lived three boys Jeff, Jack and David who were all brothers who never listened to anybody and never wanted to do their chores the mum always shouts “ JEFF GO DO THE DISHES!!” “JACK CLEAN YOUR ROOM!!” “DAVID CLEAN THE BACKYARD!!”. They always mocked people that walked or looked funny to them and always bullied people.
Two days before Halloween they were throwing rocks at this house that there lived a man known to people as The Undead. The house looked scary and haunted it made people scared to even walk to the doorstep to trick or treat or even to deliver mail.
As they threw rocks the front door opened up and a basketball was hovering between the front door. Jeff felt like it was calling him so he went to go get it then Jack tried to stop him but he kept walking then punched him in the face and ran to go get it.
When he arrived to the front door he tried to grab it but it was only a Hologram then the house started to shake and the carpet from inside grabbed him. The two brothers ran to get him and they got sucked into the big creepy house.
When they were in the house there were no sign of lights or any kind of lamps and torches. This house was cold and filthy with toys surrounding all the brothers. Jack called out “ Is everyone okay “ David yelled “ Yes “ but there was no sign of Jeff they stood up and looked for an opening where they could get out.
As they got up they heard a voice that sounded familiar to them and then they said “ It’s Jeff “. They saw a light leading up some steps so they started to walk towards it while they were walking towards the steps they both couldn’t move. When they looked down the toys were holding them so they began to ran but nothing happen they tired and tired.
They looked up there was a rope hanging from the ceiling so they grabbed it and pulled on it. While they were pulling the light shining on the steps started to turn off so they pulled harder and harder then they were out of the pit toys and began to ran towards the steps and ran up them.... TO BE CONTINUED
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Wednesday, 24 February 2016
The Boyz in Samoa
Here is the story about 4 boys who almost died in samoa. I hope you enjoy.
This is a story about how me Sione, Michael, Sefa and Albert almost died, the day we were travelling to Lalomalava Airport in Samoa. The time was 4:30am in Falealupo on the 1st of Jan 2000 Waking up to get ready for our travel. 2 hour 30 minutes of packing we decided to go for a walk around the town of Falealupo where we bought breakfast. There were not many of places to eat so we decided to eat some Taro and Chop suey at Sefa’s parents house. We started our journey at 2:30pm and began to travel down to Lalomalava.
First off we went to a restricted ground where people say that the Giant Caspa lives in the forest that they call The Dark Forest. We were on this bumpy road for about an hour or two with the heat beaming across the bright blue truck that we were in. As we entered this village there were no houses or people to be seen. This town was like a horror movie that was about to be real.. As we entered The Dark Forest We all started to get scared and the car started to slow down and Sefa yelled out to the Driver “Hey what's happening” The Driver said “the truck has broken down I think we have no gas”. We got out of the truck and Sione went looking for help as we waited it started to get dark so Michael, Sefa and Albert went looking for Sione while the truck driver stayed back.
We were getting attacked then he came to kill us.
To Be Continue...
Thursday, 4 February 2016
2015/2016 Reflection
Well 2015 was an amazing year with lots of awesome activity's & events. In 2015 I gained confidence with doing work by myself & completing work on time. This year is the year of 2016 with exciting stuff planned for us though out the year. 2016 has started really good so far so i'm thinking about about what goals I could have this year. Goals this year are Reading, Writing & Staying on task. As I enter Collage next year There will be different things compared to Intermediate and Primary school. It's really hard picking because of students that attend that collage because some students make the school look bad so not many people would go to it.
Here it is the 2015/2016 goal Reflection with all goals from 2015 to 2016.
Here it is the 2015/2016 goal Reflection with all goals from 2015 to 2016.
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