My Omaru Creek Narrative

Once upon a time there live a eel his name was Jack he live in a river called Omaru in Glen Innes. It was so beautiful that people could swim in it until people started to chuck rubbish into the river it was uninhabitable for Jack to live.

                                                                                                                 

The next day there was lots of rubbish and chemicals from the farm next to the Omaru river

he wanted to stay alive. So he went down the river he got too close to the sea water then he remember that he didn’t like sea water. He was so sick that he thought he was going to die.

A boy named Jalen was walking passed the river and saw that the river was dirty then he saw Jack next to a tree so he tried to help Jack. He went and got his friends to help him clean the river. The clean water made Jack feel so much better. Jalen and his friends watched Jack start to swim around because all the rubbish was gone and there was lots of room to play. Jaen and his friends wanted everyone to know that rubbish needs to go in the bin.